Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


the cold.

so vivid.
we should swallow color more often.choke on the prisms.drown in the streak of sunlight.

i t ’ s  s o  b r i g h t  h e r e
             the rosy color when your     eyes are closed
   the shade of shutting out the warmth of your breath,

burning papers fall on your    sleeve
                         covermeincrystal

     my throat is burning
     from the backfire of
     carbon monoxide into

words while the smoke melts the snow.describe
     why do i choke on chemicals                            to
when i need to be your air.               me

your      whispers coax the snow from my lashes
                                                                                         sympathy
my hands are so tired    let
                                i want the ash to f
                                                            a
                                                           l
                                                            l    f l y



somewhere far from here.
©2008-2009 ~kagome-kago-no-naka
:iconkagome-kago-no-naka:

Author's Comments

agh first poem in a very long time... beggars can't be choosers i suppose....

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconkagome-kago-no-naka:
thank you ^_^

--
i may be ugly, but they sure love to stare. ✂ ☹ ☂ ☠ ☆ ✠
:iconmutepoetess:
*sigh* I really wish you were inspired to write poetry more often because every time you do it totally astounds me. Brilliant work yet again, I love the images it creates, and I absolutely love the formatting. Greast job =]

--
"People run out. Money runs out. Time runs out. But words don't run out." - J. Deborah Klein

"There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed. "
- Ernest Hemmingway
:iconkagome-kago-no-naka:
:blushes:

ahhh cassie this comment is lurves. XDD

thank you, it makes me happy!! :iconglompsomethingplz::iconmutepoetess:

--
i may be ugly, but they sure love to stare. ✂ ☹ ☂ ☠ ☆ ✠
:icontinyplaidninja:
you're....alive?
YAAAAYYY!!!!

anway, loves it! ^^b
you're submitting something to the lit mag, right?

--
I haven't lost my mind; I know exactly where I left it.
:ninja:

"13 pi over 6 does not equal pi over 6. It's just kind of one of those 'duh' things."
-Dr. Harnett during Math Analysis
:iconmutepoetess:
you're welcome ^_^
thanks for the glomp lol

--
"People run out. Money runs out. Time runs out. But words don't run out." - J. Deborah Klein

"There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed. "
- Ernest Hemmingway
:iconkagome-kago-no-naka:
XDD that's like my favorite emoticon of all time.. besides
:iconlegaspplx:

--
i may be ugly, but they sure love to stare. ✂ ☹ ☂ ☠ ☆ ✠
:iconkagome-kago-no-naka:
yaayyzzz

XD

yes. i ish submit this one and in bloom.

--
i may be ugly, but they sure love to stare. ✂ ☹ ☂ ☠ ☆ ✠
:iconmutepoetess:
lol nice
myself I'm quite partial to the :iconjackskellingtonplz: lol

--
"People run out. Money runs out. Time runs out. But words don't run out." - J. Deborah Klein

"There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed. "
- Ernest Hemmingway

Details

November 2, 2008
3.4 KB

Statistics

17
2 [who?]
53 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Site Map